BEST IELTS Writing Task 2, 30th April

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

SAMPLE ANSWER

Every worker needs to feel comfortable in their professional environment in order to be prolific. Therefore, this can only be achieved if the relations established between colleagues are close, which will lead to the perfect workplace. In my opinion, the priority of all human beings related to their professional lives, should not be to focus only on their job.

Firstly, the fact that coworkers are amiable and create strong bonds among the rest of the team, is positive for the enterprise as a whole. In other words, only when the feeling of closeness and understanding is bonded between the staff members, they can act as a real team that wants to reach the same objective. In the long run, the good relationship between peers will be reflected in the enterprise’s achievements. Then, working should not be the only and most important issue when talking about daily life in the office.

Secondly, a good reason to completely disagree with the mentioned statement is to understand the human being as an entity with feelings and needs. Meanwhile, many persons in directive charges tend to perceive workers as machinery that produces something, others put the focus on the human side. Indeed, every integrant of any department of a company must feel in a friendly environment to feel valued. Due to the globalized world we live in, sometimes we tend to forget about being empathetic and just highlight the importance of being productive.

To sum up, I completely disagree with the words that remark how important is to just work in your workplace, and forget about having a good relationship with the people you share a profession with. This is very insensitive and negative for any worker.

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