BEST IELTS Writing Task 2, 9th November

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Parent, usually mothers, give up work, choose to stay home and look after families. Some people think the government should give them salary. Do you agree or disagree. Give the reasons from your own knowledge and experience.

SAMPLE ANSWER

I definitely agree with the notion that mothers, who stay at home to look after their children and family should be compensated by the government in the form of a paid maternity leave. In the following paragraphs I intend to put forth my arguments to support my views.

My major argument is that the future of the world rests largely in the hands of the generation we are rearing. Once a child is born, it becomes national property. Mothers are the front line childcare providers and therefore, if they are supported by the government they can do their job better. This help can be in the form of a salary by the government. In most Indian homes the mother’s salary is necessary to support the family. So, if the mother does not get paid, then she has to go back to job and this affects the childcare. Nurseries fail to provide the one-to-one interaction children need.

Secondly, a woman has to go with very stressful time physically, emotionally, and financially during pregnancy period. There is extra financial burden related to her prenatal care, preparing for a new baby, and then the care of the baby. Therefore, government help can ease their burden and they can look after their babies nicely.

Finally, if women are supported by the government, they can look after their health. Health as such involves several factors. It is not simply being free from diseases. So, proper education, enough employment opportunities, food security and affordable medical care are some of the contributory factors that the government can provide to make women healthy. Needless to say, there should be enough provision for all these in a society that expects to be healthy today and tomorrow. It is well known that women play the most crucial role in managing the health of the family. And healthy families contribute greatly to social welfare.

The opponents, however, claim that it is a personal choice to stay home to look after family. So, why should there be government support for women who stay at home to look after their families? They have a point, but I still feel that women need the aid considering the physical, emotional, and financial stress they face.

To sum up, women should be supported by the government to look after the family and themselves. This can contribute a lot to social welfare.

IELTS Writing Task 2

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