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BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 12th November
ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
The table below the shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
| Total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum |
| During the year before refurbishment | 74,000 |
| During the year after refurbishment | 92,000 |
SAMPLE ANSWER
The table below show the amount of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the years after and the year before it was modernized. After the table there is the charts that show the result of surveys asking people how satisfied they were with their visit those museum, during the same two periods.
It is obviously that the number of visitors significantly increased after the refurbishment from 74,000 before the reconstruction to 92,000 after it had been done. Now lets look at the charts. The year before refurbishment shows a negative pattern: the result of survey illustrate that only 15% of visitors were very satisfied and the number of dissatisfied people was 40%. The year after refurbishment illustrates that the number of dissatisfied visitors declined and became 15% on a contrary, people who were very satisfied increased to 35% Comparing the amount of satisfied visitors we can also see an upward trend (it increased from 30% to 40% after the refurbishment).
To sum up, we can say that all work that has been done to attract new visitors to Ashdown sMuseum has reached its aim.
