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BEST IELTS Writing Task 2, 3rd October
IELTS WRITING TASK 2
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some people feel that entertainers (e. g film stars, pop musicians, sports stars) are paid too much money. do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?
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It is often said that public persons earn a lot of money and at the same time there are many jobs who are not so well paid despite that are very important for our society.From my point of view I think we have to maintain a balance and do not forget to invest in others activities who are important too.
Nowadays, we live in a century who looks up for the models. Children are very influenced by influencing people. For example, on the internet, there are many iconic persons who promote trips, clothes, games and so on. Adolescents want to become like this persons. In order to be known on the market, many companies’ appeals to the influence
people for advertising and pay a lot of money for this. I think that in a way they deserve that money because it is a hard work to maintain you on the top. Another example is footballers who gain a lot of money, but they deserve this because it is a sport who needs more physical effort, this people are always away from their family. Pop music, film stars is in the same position, they have a lot of money, but they particulary life has to suffer.
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On the other hand, we do not have to forget that, are many sports who deserve attention and money, like handball, volleyball, gymnastics and so on. In addition to this, many sportsmen who represent us at a high level at the Olympics Games, they do not gain a lot of money and sometimes they are forced to do their exercises in unpropiate halls without adequate equipment. The government should spend money too in the medical area, in many countries, there are doctors who gain less money that a public person, although they save people’s lives and learn a lot during the university years.
Taking everything into consideration, entertainers have their own place in our life, we need them in some way and, but at the same time we do not have to forget that other activities should be equally paid for their jobs.
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