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BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 22nd June
IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
The below table chart shows the percentage of employed people in different employment sectors according to age-groups in the year 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
| Employment Sectors | 18-24 | 25-34 | 35-44 | 45-55 |
| Entertainment | 70% | 10% | 15% | 5% |
| Manufacturing | 20% | 35% | 35% | 10% |
| Education | 15% | 20% | 25% | 40% |
| Engineering | 20% | 35% | 20% | 25% |
SAMPLE ANSWER
The provided table chart gives information about the proportion of people in different age-groups employed in various employment sectors in the year 2000.
It can be clearly seen that most young employees to work in the entertainment sector with ratio of 70% under the age group of 18-24 while in the age-group of 25-34, 35-44 and 45-55, the proportion was very low. In manufacturing sector, same ratio (35%) of the people were employed in the age-group of 25-34 and 35-44. However, in 45-55 age-group, the percentage of the people employed was 10% and it was double in 18-24 age-group.
On the other hand, education sector had 15% employees of 18-24 age-group that increased by 5% in every age group except in 45-55 which had 40% employees. However, approximately same ratio of people were employed in engineering sector, with around one-third of the employees in the first two age-groups while one quarter in the age-group of 45-55 and it was slightly less in 35-44 age group.
Finally, the highest proportion of young employees worked in entertainment sector while more number of aged people in 45-55 chose to work for education sector.
